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Starlight Glimmer by Camyllea Starlight Glimmer by Camyllea
I've started to like Starlight with all the new episodes, and because of that I wanted to draw her for the first time.
I had a bit of trouble drawing her pose, but it turned out okay.
Overall I think this looks pretty good, not great though, but feel free to tell me what you think in the comments below! :)

EDIT: I tweaked the pose a bit, so that her neck won't look too long
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BronyNo786 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
GREAT SCOTT... that shading!! Clap 
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Malort57 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2016  Professional General Artist
Tout va bien!
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Camyllea Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks! :)
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bubbleyfisheyo3o Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful use of lighting!
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Camyllea Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks! :)
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bubbleyfisheyo3o Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome
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AriaGrill Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this~ Great job!
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Camyllea Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you! :)
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penguin04 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Awesome
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Camyllea Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you! :)
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FluffleLord Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great work with the colors! 
The lighting looks perfect
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Camyllea Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you! :)
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cajobif Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2016
BEautiful work.

So... what is your opinion on her?
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Pirill-Poveniy Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2016
Nice work, keep it up!

I believe the argument made below is pretty accurate, there's definitely something going on with the neck. Consider the fact that in a normal standing pose, the chin and rump are almost in line with each other. :)

I'd also advise against making the far eye concave like that, as it looks a bit odd to me. Tweaking the anatomy/angle a bit to ensure you can see a bit of the edge of the head will ensure the eye itself doesn't look too concave or otherwise bloated.
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Camyllea Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the critique! :)
After taking a break and looking at the whole drawing closer, I can really start to see her neck being way too long.
So I tweaked her pose a bit, and hopefully she will look better now. And thanks for the example of the regular standing pose, I'll keep that in mind <3
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Pirill-Poveniy Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2016
Glad I could help. :D
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Armagedtom Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I really like the lighting on this one! The mane turned out good too, I think Starlights mane is pretty tricky.
The horn and muzzle are crisp and have solid structure. Perhaps her neck is a bit too long? and front leg
seems to get in the way bit. Great work overall though! :)
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Camyllea Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I seriously can't stress enough on how much I appreciate your critique, it's incredibly useful! :)
And I actually did have trouble with her neck especially, earlier on when I was drawing her, her neck was way too short, so maybe I overcompensated for that.
Thank you again for the critique! <3
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Armagedtom Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your very welcome <3 I'm glad you enjoy the feedback! I see yeah I fiddle around with proportions aswell haha.

I like you work, it's inspiring me to improve too. Perhaps even create that painted style of work.
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Camyllea Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww, you're too nice Hug 
And people giving me feedback so that I can improve, motivates me aswell to draw even more and better :)
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cottoncloudyfilly Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Ihana!!
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Camyllea Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Kiitti :)
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cottoncloudyfilly Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2016  Student Digital Artist
:) eipä kestä
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